Comments on: dream http://www.munchicken.com/poetry/2005/04/25/dream/ Thu, 05 Jan 2012 07:16:14 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 By: zingiber_fleur http://www.munchicken.com/poetry/2005/04/25/dream/comment-page-1/#comment-4 zingiber_fleur Thu, 28 Apr 2005 15:39:34 +0000 http://munchicken.10500bc.org/index.php/2005/04/25/dream/#comment-4 the images in this piece are beautiful but so contradictory--how different is the Moon from a lake from a sunset. Even without the title I would feel this was a dream--you evoke that very strongly...that confusing sense of knowing where you are and not knowing at the same time. but I find myself disturbed by the references to 'they' and the passive 'accidents will happen' as if there is an outide force. the images in this piece are beautiful but so contradictory–how different is the Moon from a lake from a sunset.

Even without the title I would feel this was a dream–you evoke that very strongly…that confusing sense of knowing where you are and not knowing at the same time.

but I find myself disturbed by the references to ‘they’ and the passive ‘accidents will happen’ as if there is an outide force.

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